Life Random Thoughts

Deadly Waters

September 5, 2010

My previous blog entry was a poem that I had written based on a guy that I was dating a while back.  It was more about how things ended badly.  However, the poem that I call “Deadly Waters” was written based on a more positive level of the relationship.  Like I said, he truly is an amazing person.  When I was writing this poem, I was hoping to add more to it later on.  However, at the last minute,  I decided that it would be better short and sweet.  Enjoy!  🙂

“Deadly Waters”

By M. S.

Sinking in this ocean of tears
I’m drowning in my sorrows
This pain I can no longer bear.
I’ve lost all hope for tomorrow.

These deadly waters show no end
The darkness taking over me.
Out of nowhere, you take my hand,
And breathe life into me.

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